News Gathering
1. Events calendars
Deputy Mayor’s Cup held on November 04-05, 2023
Date Event : November 5th, 2023
Who will be involved ; Atlet, Coach, Participant, Spectators.
What is the purpose: The primary purpose of the championship is to encourage and recognize outstanding achievements in archery, fostering a competitive environment that pushes participants to reach their full potential.
How much will it cost : Participants pay Rp.300,000 and Officials pay Rp.50,000 while spectators are free
Background research
The Deputy Mayor's Cup Archery Championship is an annual sporting event that brings together archers from various professional clubs in a competitive and prestigious setting. The championship aims to promote and celebrate excellence in archery, providing a platform for talented athletes to showcase their skills and compete at a high level.
2. Conducting the interview
Personal interview
The questions :
1) What are your preparations before competing in the deputy mayor's cup?
2) Do you feel nervous during the game?
3) How many medals did you bring home?
The Interview Form Name of Interviewer: Putri Vania
Age : 22
Question | Answer |
1) What are your preparations before competing in the deputy mayor's cup? | As usual practice, practice and practice |
2) Do you feel nervous during the game? | There was a feeling of nervousness during the Semi-Final round, when finally I got the Gold Medal, alhamdulillah I able to get through it all |
3) How many medals did you bring home? | 4 Medals: 2 Gold Medals and 2 Bronze Medals |
4) How do you feel after bringing home 4 medals? | Alhamdulillah so happy and feel so grateful, But It's not just about the medals; it's about the discipline, focus, and sheer determination brings to every training session. This success is well-deserved |
Lead
In a remarkable feat of precision and skill, Putri Vania an archer in the Recurve division, secured a stunning two gold and two bronze medals at the Deputy Mayor's Cup Archery Championship held on November 5, 2023, leaving the sporting community in awe.
What :
Putri Vania clinches 2 gold and 2 bronze medals at the Deputy Mayor's Cup.
Why:
Exceptional performance, precision, and dedication to the sport.
When:
November 5, 2023.
Who:
Putri Vania, archers from professional clubs (GTS).
Where:
GOR Gondrong Tangerang City.
How:
Outstanding skills, rigorous training, and a competitive environment.
Quotations (Fatimah)
• “It's not just about the medals; it's about the discipline, focus, and sheer determination brings to every training session. This success is well-deserved.”
• "Even though there was a feeling of nervousness during the Semi-Final round, when finally I got the Gold Medal, alhamdulillah I able to get through it all."
HEADLINE:
"Archery Sensation Clinches 2 Gold and 2 Bronze Medals at Deputy Mayor's Cup"
BY LINE:
Starlight
Type of news
Sport (Archery)
The headline is clear and concise, efficiently delivering information and summarising the central news angle, with minor room for improvement.
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Overall Rating: 9